I'ma go ahead and post one more for now if that's cooooo.
Thanks in advance for any looks or response. (:

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Too small, too tight. Rush, perhaps 4pool auto-wins, and if not, T will just wall-in and use tanks to control the whole map. Mains should only have 1 in-out and it should be through the nat.

Edit: Also your min formations and numbers are bad. Also gas issue.

Looks fun for non-pro, and if players agreed to no 4 pool, and if terran doesn't abuse tanks on those ledges.

Yeah I'm totally non-pro, so maybe that's why it seemed like a good idea.
I was concerned about the size and rush tactics, but it was too small to really do anything about it. XP
I fail! ):
Guess I'll consider the responses and avoid such mistakes in the future.