She lays in there waiting. Waiting for you. You gave her time to be exposed, but all she found was hate. Now tears she makes you bleed, mean only retribution. Forgiveness is ten miles away, and now is where she ends. She clings to you so tightly, but not in fear of loss. It's because the absence of love, is what she now must bridge. So she offers her apologies, but it's you who needs forgived.

Congratulations, you've made a meme. Prepare to hear this grammatical abomination rubbed in your face for several years to come.

No, Moose, you just made it a meme. It's a Shocko-Moose creation.

It's you who needs forgived!

I figured it was wrong before I posted it, but my lack of care this morning let it slide...

O. I thought that you meant to do that. Poetic license, ya know. Which made me thinks moose calling you out wasn't really... called for. But I guess it was. Anyway, the poem is really dribble and I don't have any other comments to give.

Yeah I hadn't slept well... woke up because another tenant made a huge crash. I decided to check girlfriends facebook and her ex was flirting, so I waited til 7am when I knew she'd wake and text her wtf, after that I couldn't sleep and I made that on my phone... I need paper

You think that'll make me forgived you?!

yus forgived me!

You just bastardized your own meme. It's you who needs forgived.

Its spam if anyone else does it, its awesome when moose does it.

...You need to work on your poetry skills. This sounds like the chorus of 10 screamo songs stringed together with a tad of . I Don't understand what horrid force possessed you into writing this, but it definitely is ten miles away from having anything positive said about it over the intarwebs.

Long story short: After writing this, It's you who needs forgived.

No, leave him alone. It's all of you who needs forgived.

It is not I who need forgived, rather it is you, you horrid poetry supporter!

This originally was going to be screamo. If you care to flick through the pages, I've written some good poems. I am going to write an amazing poem to gain your forgivedness

Actually Shocko, I've yet to see you write anything that isn't average at best.

They were rated well. But you wait. This next poem will be cosmically orgasmic!

This is why SEN can't have nice things.

I made an okay / good poem, I'm waiting on my girlfriends laptop so forgived and other discusts are GG'd, but prepare for socks to be blown...

I hope there will be another grammatical error for us to pick at.

I can make a meme vershun if u wuntQuestionMark