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Top left is main, bottum right is main. There are two stacked Xel'Naga Temples which gives you more room in your main. Cant really think of anything else to say.

EDIT: I am still looking around for tank holes. I am aware of that issue.

EDIT EDIT: Its called Crater because there was supposed to be a crater in the middle. Unfortunately, I cant do extended terrain that well and it turned out really bad so I decided to put some High Ground there.

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Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Nov 29 2009, 9:24 pm by Ciara.

I love the map's design but every high cliff is not buildable or? I don't know but that could make it much harder to defend tanks when they are on the hill near your base.
Also, you can fill the holes with unwalkable-doodads to avoid tank holes

Perhaps I should add a little room on that ramp leaving your main so races can build defenses.

EDIT: Need conformation whether I should do this or not.

I would say yes, because of Terrans.

Done. Updated original post.

I would say your map got a lot better. But there's still the choke problem in the middle. You need to widen the gap.

It's awesome ..

The map is decent.

T can still use tanks on all of the expoes (not just nats, all of the base sites other than mains and the raised jungle expoes).

I found it waaaay to easy to bottleneck the mains from both behind the upper terrain and on the upper terrain.

The mains are a little too small, even with the Xel'Naga Temples, IMO.

You might want to consider making the raised jungle expoes only obtainable through drops. Just a suggestion, not a complaint or anything.

Remember, you don't have to do everything I tell you to.

You are improving, but try to spend a bit more time on this stuff. Your main problem from map to map is forgetting to break up the high ground near your expoes (and occasionally mains).

True. Ill watch out for that in my next map
There is a ramp. Look closely.
.... ^.^
Yeah. I kind of failed with the anti tank high ground.

I was suggesting not having a ramp there.

I would really say the map would be better if the middle didn't have anything on it.