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My new video..
Apr 27 2009, 1:56 pm
By: CooL  

Apr 27 2009, 1:56 pm CooL Post #1



NEW TAX VIDEO

You know, I'm living in Korea(I'm a korean, also)!
All of my videos is in Korean, but this new video is different >.> It's in English!
This is rly short video, it just says "PAY THE TAXES!". :D

I participated in a contest what is all about tax. This is my practicing one, yea.

Just watch this and leave a comment please! <3



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Apr 27 2009, 8:37 pm RIVE Post #2

Just Here For The Pie

YOUR DUTY

PAY OR NOT


(lol) Nice. Almost as if it were an epic commercial on television.



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Apr 27 2009, 9:00 pm ClansAreForGays Post #3



This made my head hurt:

You're in Korea, but filing US tax forms?!

You make the idea of tax seem scary epic, not good epic.

Your engrish is totally broken "Your Duty .... Do pay your taxes!"

And you also say that "Your Good Life" hinges the taxes you pay.

First you say that there isn't a choice "Can't Choose" Then you turn around and say "Pay or Not?" The only excuse for this is if a person is asking themselves "Should a pay or not?" but even then you still fail because you just switched from 2nd person to 1st person and then BACK to 1st person.


Just critiquing this made my head hurt. Grade: F-




Apr 27 2009, 10:37 pm Centreri Post #4

Relatively ancient and inactive

I dunno, i liek it :c

You need to pay more attention to where this money goes, though. This money goes to your military, to defend you! *picture of a batallion of F-22's*, etc.



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Apr 28 2009, 5:37 pm Jello-Jigglers Post #5



Hey, Koreans can write engrish too!



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May 11 2009, 6:16 am DaltonSerdynski Post #6



thats funny as hell almost made me pay my taxes :D



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May 15 2009, 8:46 am CooL Post #7



Quote from DaltonSerdynski
thats funny as hell almost made me pay my taxes :D
LOL Thanks for saying that! haha



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May 15 2009, 5:03 pm BlueWolf Post #8



After Effects? Your english confused me a bit.



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May 16 2009, 3:30 am Vi3t-X Post #9



Quote from ClansAreForGays
This made my head hurt:

You're in Korea, but filing US tax forms?!

You make the idea of tax seem scary epic, not good epic.

Your engrish is totally broken "Your Duty .... Do pay your taxes!"

And you also say that "Your Good Life" hinges the taxes you pay.

First you say that there isn't a choice "Can't Choose" Then you turn around and say "Pay or Not?" The only excuse for this is if a person is asking themselves "Should a pay or not?" but even then you still fail because you just switched from 2nd person to 1st person and then BACK to 1st person.


Just critiquing this made my head hurt. Grade: F-

I think CAFG is racist. :P



It was however, a decently made video. Broken English used. It would appear you tried to be like a tax collector, going: LOL PAY NAO.
Weird, made general sense, and was cute. :P



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