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This isn't that great, but hey!
Aug 13 2008, 5:34 am
By: InsolubleFluff  

Aug 13 2008, 5:34 am InsolubleFluff Post #1



I made this poem specifically with no particular structure, absolutely none.
I didn't try to make the sentences even remotely balance out in sylallbols, I tried to tell a story I understood, so here it is:

A smile like that has,
Surely's got you pretty far,
But do you feel up to par,
When you fall short of the bar,
Could have anyone you want,
But you didn't really think,
Could I be nearer to the brink,
If I were closer to the clue,
Stick to the ceiling as if you were glue,
Watch the sky, pass you by,
Fall into an ocean bed,
Rest your neck and turn your head,
Now there sitting head in hand,
It's your one true loving man,
Oh he's yours, he adores, the sight
Of his lover warm and tight,
Comfy in her little world,
The solar system twirls,
As her eyes begin to tear up,
Well that's not fair, come on just cheer up,
You're not as lonely as you think,
But you're mind is on the brink,
And so you stall,
Back to the walls, you fall...
And face another day,
Speachless, what's left to say?
You loved him once, you tried to twice,
But she just wasn't really nice,
So you bow down on your knees,
And you beg and then you plead,
Can we just dance away,
Get your life out of this haze,
And maybe then, you'll be amazed,
At the feeling that you find,
Dug up from beneath the snow,
OH the happyness does show,
So tell me love lets go?



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[02:30 am]
Symmetry -- I dreamed about that as a kid. The idea of a computer capable of analyzing a starcraft map and calculating the fastest possible way to hit the victory condition
[02:29 am]
Symmetry -- But can AI beat my custom maps?
[12:32 pm]
Oh_Man -- yea APM vs eAPM
[08:48 am]
NimoStar -- plus most of the human APM is just spam clicking APM inflation
[08:47 am]
NimoStar -- the thing with the "*12" thing is completely misleading. The AI isn't using two control groups, it can use each of those actions to command a single unit individually and issue different commands to each single unit.
[08:06 am]
NudeRaider -- NudeRaider
NudeRaider shouted: Oh_Man Artosis hasn't caught on how devastating the perfect focus fire is. With the mutas he was like "the Mutas always seem to have less hp than against a human". But he didn't notice that the flock he had selected always just had one muta that was hurt. Same with the wraiths here. He's talking about how valks+wraith is gonna destroy Pluto's valks, then 5s later he's dumbfounded the human player's air is just gone and he never figured out why. And for some reason didn't even think to go back and look at the battle.
*Pluto's wraiths
[08:05 am]
NudeRaider -- Oh_Man Artosis hasn't caught on how devastating the perfect focus fire is. With the mutas he was like "the Mutas always seem to have less hp than against a human". But he didn't notice that the flock he had selected always just had one muta that was hurt. Same with the wraiths here. He's talking about how valks+wraith is gonna destroy Pluto's valks, then 5s later he's dumbfounded the human player's air is just gone and he never figured out why. And for some reason didn't even think to go back and look at the battle.
[2026-9-22. : 2:18 am]
Oh_Man -- Close enuf
[2026-9-21. : 4:14 pm]
Vrael -- perhaps there is a small professional player trapped in a box in the server rack where pluto is running? hmm?
[2026-9-21. : 4:14 pm]
Vrael -- 240*12*2 is 5760, where is the other 240 APM?
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