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This isn't that great, but hey!
Aug 13 2008, 5:34 am
By: InsolubleFluff  

Aug 13 2008, 5:34 am InsolubleFluff Post #1



I made this poem specifically with no particular structure, absolutely none.
I didn't try to make the sentences even remotely balance out in sylallbols, I tried to tell a story I understood, so here it is:

A smile like that has,
Surely's got you pretty far,
But do you feel up to par,
When you fall short of the bar,
Could have anyone you want,
But you didn't really think,
Could I be nearer to the brink,
If I were closer to the clue,
Stick to the ceiling as if you were glue,
Watch the sky, pass you by,
Fall into an ocean bed,
Rest your neck and turn your head,
Now there sitting head in hand,
It's your one true loving man,
Oh he's yours, he adores, the sight
Of his lover warm and tight,
Comfy in her little world,
The solar system twirls,
As her eyes begin to tear up,
Well that's not fair, come on just cheer up,
You're not as lonely as you think,
But you're mind is on the brink,
And so you stall,
Back to the walls, you fall...
And face another day,
Speachless, what's left to say?
You loved him once, you tried to twice,
But she just wasn't really nice,
So you bow down on your knees,
And you beg and then you plead,
Can we just dance away,
Get your life out of this haze,
And maybe then, you'll be amazed,
At the feeling that you find,
Dug up from beneath the snow,
OH the happyness does show,
So tell me love lets go?



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