I am helping. I am suggesting that you seriously play melee for once in your life, and see your map then. You'll see why I told you, because you'll see a lot of things wrong, and you will know what to correct all by yourself.
I do in fact play melee, it just has been forever that I have ever used to be as good.
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It's because you didnt play it seriously. :\
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It seems very difficult for Z to set up a defense after FE to the nat, since it looks like units can go up the ramp straight toward the main without being bothered by the nat, so Z would have to have sunkens in both areas which damages the economy. Also, can the expansions behind the bases shoot into the main mineral lines? And make sure you remove those bridges.
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BeDazed
Ultraviolet -- That's strange, it looks like you targeted the base image file (sometimes people make the mistake of just using the imgur page link which doesn't work for embedding) but it still didn't work it sounds like.
NudeRaider -- I think SEN has trouble with https or hotlinking is forbidden. It certainly is nothing about the size, it just fails to get any size. You can get it working if you use imgur and include the actual image link for the img tag. Like this: [img=https://i.imgur.com/ddYqXZa.jpeg]
