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[Short] Every Day

Nov 24 2011, 1:55 am
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Nov 24 2011, 1:55 am

Sand Wraith Post #1

she/her

A second-person exploration piece that I did for my Writer's Craft course. I hope you enjoy it.

http://kupax.com/files/18515_169l0/You_Every%20Day.pdf

Nov 24 2011, 2:57 am

ClansAreForGays Post #2

Meh. Should have been 2 pages at the most. Probably would have completely hated it if I couldn't relate to it as much as I could.

http://waitbutwhy.com/2013/09/why-generation-y-yuppies-are-unhappy.html
"We're being taught to hate downwards"

Nov 24 2011, 3:08 am

Sand Wraith Post #3

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What I should have done was make it reaaaaaaaaally long, drawn-out, and dull to reflect the content. yeaaaa, am i marrying form and content correctly yet????

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Probably would have completely hated it if I couldn't relate to it as much as I could.

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As always, thanks for commenting.

Nov 24 2011, 4:08 am

TiKels Post #4

I really enjoyed this one.

"If a topic that clearly interest noone needs to be closed to underline the "we don't want this here" message, is up to debate."

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Nov 24 2011, 4:15 am ubermctastic Post #5

Nice, was hoping to see something about staredit lol

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Nov 27 2011, 5:31 am 3FFA Post #6

Great.... I was just about to go to sleep too.... if I start thinking like this tomorrow and kill myself I blame you. :-(

-in other words, awesome job.

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Nov 27 2011, 5:36 am

Raitaki Post #7

Second person POV? You sure you didn't rip this off some forum game? :awesome:

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Feb 17 2012, 3:36 pm

Dapperdan Post #8

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Oh, but what is this? You do not wish to wake yet?

No one thinks like this. Instead of trying to be fancy, use a more natural diction. It will be far more effective. If you want to try to rewrite this, then this is my advice for the whole piece.

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