HOLY SHIT! get me a print friendly version or like put up a ms word document

I've decided to totally rewrite the ending. Wait a little while. That way I get a spellcheck in too

No offense man, but nobody wants to read it.

I want to read it

Dude blacklight, shut up. Thats not a polite way of saying to a work thats cost him loads of time.

This isn't my primary writing community, dude. When I put it out here, I don't expect huge readership. All the same, some people may express interest (i.e. MasterJohnny), and THEIR BUSINESS IS NONE OF YOURS.

On a different tone, I ran it through SpellCheck, said "screw the other spelling errors," and have a copy.

But not on the school computers. So tonight.

Well, I would consider reading it if it were in a proper format. ( nudge nudge pdf)

Fuck PDF. PDF is the worst possible format for anything.