Ugh...
Jan 5 2010, 8:09 pm
By: InsolubleFluff  

Jan 5 2010, 8:09 pm InsolubleFluff Post #1



I wrote a poem a while back, it needs a lot of fine tuning and probably a bit of re-writing, but I cannot be bothered. I am posting it for the lulz more than anything else, so here it is:

Love, what a difficult decision
Over complicated and needing revision
None-the-less we fall like division
Everyone's made to look with precision
Loneliness will become the excision
You try to avoid it, like a head on collision.

Incarcerated though, you will become
Such a price for happiness can be overcome

You need only to lose and then to endure
Ostracized you become from your prior amour
Understandable, no doubt, this I am sure.



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Jan 5 2010, 8:13 pm MadZombie Post #2



Well since you say it's for the lulz. To be honest as I read it, it felt like a rap song. I read it in Immortal techniques voice. um anyway...



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Jan 5 2010, 8:15 pm InsolubleFluff Post #3



Immortal Techniqu (L)



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