I'll update this topic with what I come up with
I started it 30 minutes ago, wondering around and trying random stuff. I am very pleased of it so far. The timing is much in it, so having the tab copied under is somewhat useless, though I want to save it somewhere else than in my mind ;o


e|-2-3-|-2h3p2-----0-|---0-----------0-|-1-|-3p1-3-1-----|
B|-3-3-|-------3p0-1-|---1-1h2p1-----0-|-1-|-----1-1-----|
G|-2-2-|-----------0-|---2-------2p0-0-|-2-|-----0-2-----|
D|-0-0-|-----------2-|---2-----------2-|-3-|-----2-3-----|
A|-----|-0---------3-|---0-----------2-|-3-|-----3-------|
E|-----|-------------|-0-------------0-|-1-|-------------|

It is missing some basses when I am not playing chords and I'm not sure about the one actually in. Anyways, if anyone feel like playing this and want to improve it, any help will be appreciated

Post has been edited 4 time(s), last time on Sep 21 2009, 2:46 am by payne.

The plucked e and the Fmaj at the end don't sound right. It's too late for me to figure out what sounds right, but try something else.

Though I may have played it too slowly.

After the a minor, it would sound better if you kept your middle finger on the 2nd fret on the d string, instead of picking both opens there. The whole bracketed off f major part really doesn't sound too good in general. This is certainly no conquest of musical composition. :b

Thanks for help guys!
After a lil' weed, I've tried this (didn't have much time xD). (Edited)

Updated...
What should I do after that pull-off? :S I can't find any nice chord beside an F
And do you guys have any tips for compositions? This is pretty much my first try

Anyone to help please?
I really wish some people could give me tips about how to write an instrumental song ;o