Staredit Network > Forums > Media, Art, and Literature > Topic: Excellent Poem
Excellent Poem
Feb 6 2010, 12:54 am
By: Super Duper  

Feb 6 2010, 12:54 am Super Duper Post #1




I cried my way through school that day,
That day my brother went away.
Days apart were no more that two,
and even those were numbered few.
He was my role model,
Sturdy in the saddle.
Nothing ever made him cry.
The only thing that scared him was to fly.
But as he boarded the plane and I wave goodbye,
I saw a tear leak out his eye.
He would be gone for so long,
and he was so very young.
He said this was something he had to do,
to go out and protect me and you.
So as he ensures our freedom,
I am at home praying for him.
He is a United States Marine,
And I have more pride in him than you could ever dream.



No, I didnt make this. All credit here: http://www.angelfire.com/wa/warpoetry/Williams.html



None.

Feb 7 2010, 7:08 am Dapperdan Post #2



(this poem's actually very mediocre (it's cliche/vague/trite). though i could understand why you appreciate it... i guess)



None.

Options
  Back to forum
Please log in to reply to this topic or to report it.
Members in this topic: None.
[2026-8-06. : 2:41 am]
Oh_Man -- i used to play TF2 competitive in that clan, and also was PR manager (ie: i wrote all the website posts)
[2026-8-06. : 2:41 am]
Oh_Man -- another fun fact iaguz actually joined the clan i was part of - Frenetic Array
[2026-8-06. : 2:40 am]
Symmetry -- Human memory is a fragile, fallible thing
[2026-8-06. : 2:39 am]
Oh_Man -- i realised all his shit was halluc and i wiped out his measly army of fake hallucs and he called GG - yeah thts wat actually happened damn false memory strikes again
[2026-8-06. : 2:38 am]
Oh_Man -- i was zerg, the toss guy did a bunch of hallucinates, and i was like, welp, i guess i'm dead, but i have that mindset of never giving up, so attacked him anyway, then tht was wen
[2026-8-06. : 2:38 am]
Oh_Man -- coz i was actually a zerg main, so wat ACTUALLY happened was a complete reverse of this
[2026-8-06. : 2:37 am]
Oh_Man -- i found an old comment of mine i actually think the idra thing over-ride my own memory
[2026-8-06. : 2:22 am]
Symmetry -- was it idra
[2026-8-06. : 1:52 am]
NudeRaider -- Oh_Man
Oh_Man shouted: and i went on to win the tournament, and a pair of steelseries headphones. i even reember how i won the final match - hallucinated a fck-tonne of units and my opponent thought i had way more than he did and GGed
classic
[2026-8-05. : 2:56 pm]
Oh_Man -- long story short - patience is a virtue!
Please log in to shout.


Members Online: NudeRaider, Symmetry