Hi guys. hmm.
Hey, Do you know a EUD map named "HalloweenPriest"? I think that map was only played on 1.13~1.13f[?].
But a Korean mapper, named rpgkdh, has fixed it, and now it can be played on 1.15.2.
I didn't know about the old "HalloweenPriest"[~1.13f]. I just think about that map is same as 1.15.2's HalloweenPriest.
Someone said to me "The old HalloweenPriest" was a really great EUD map. It had many systems, and people was really exited by that map.

My ignorance made a mistake.
A SC player named "RPG-". He was a great player. And he is a mapper, too.
I had played a map with my friends (and with "RPG-"), and talked about the EUD.
Suddenly, "RPG-" said to me about "HalloweenPriest", And I said "I know about that map!"
And..
I said to him.. "That map is seemed like a junk. It doesn't have many EUD Triggers. I don't know why people like that map." (..my bad.)
And he had angried, talked talked talked about that my mistake.
But I didn't accept that. ..I angried as him.
And he said "You do such a child, you're a really foolish guy!"
Yeah. I know. I was wrong. and.. He said to me, "You don't have any good skills for map making."
I think I know many things for map making..
"You're just a noob!"
I think I'm not a noob..

I don't know why! He just angried about my mistake.
But why he had to said about my map making skills?
Am I a noob, really? Am I haven't enough skills for map making?

hmmm.
Hey guys.

I don't know I can post here, like this topic.
But, please answer me.

"Am I a noob, really? Am I haven't enough skills for map making?"

And the..
Are my grammers correct?

I think I have to learn english more.. heehee;

Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on May 11 2008, 11:12 am by CooL.

You have nothing to worry about, CooL. You made it into Oo for a reason.

I haven't seen any of your maps, so I can't really comment. I'm sure you're not that bad at all, though.

As for the grammar, there are a bunch of mistakes. But I think we got the general idea.

Okay. You're right. I think I don't have to worry about that :] Thanks!

hmmm Then,,
Can you fix the wrong grammars for me? I don't know what is incorrect.

Hmm. Well, then, could you fix the improper grammar for me? I don't know what is and what isn't correct.

I think this is as correct as it can get:

Hi, guys. Hmm. (This part is actually unnecessary. You can just start with the next sentence.)
Hey, do you know an EUD map named "HalloweenPriest?" I think the map was only played on 1.13~1.13f[?].
A Korean mapper named rpgkdh has fixed it, and now it can be played on 1.15.2.
I didn't know about the old "HalloweenPriest"[~1.13f], I just thought it was the same as 1.15.2's "HalloweenPriest."
Someone told me the old "HalloweenPriest" was a really great EUD map. It had many systems and people really liked it.

My ignorance made a mistake. (This sentence is awkward. You could say, "I made a mistake due to my ignorance" instead.)
A SC player named "RPG-". He was a great player. And he is a mapper, too. (These three sentences should be 1 sentence: "RPG- is a really great mapper and SC player.")
I had played a map with my friends (and with "RPG-"), and talked about the EUDs.
Suddenly "RPG-" mentioned "HalloweenPriest," and I said, "I know about that map!"
I told him, "That map is seemed like junk. It doesn't have many EUD triggers. I don't know why people like it." (..my bad.)
And he became angry, talking about my mistake.
But I didn't accept that. I became as angry as well.
He said, "You are such a child; you're a really foolish guy!"
Yeah, I know I was wrong. Then, he said to me, "You don't have any good map making skills."
I think I know many things about map making.
"You're just a noob!"
I don't think I'm a noob.

I don't know why he became angry about my mistake.
Why did he have to talk about my map making skills?
Am I a noob, really? Do I not have good map making skills?


I don't know if I can post this topic here, but please answer this.
"Am I a noob, really? Do I not have good map making skills?"

Also, is my grammer correct?

I think I have to learn better English. Heehee.


Since this is the internet, perfect grammar doesn't really matter. There are people like me who enjoy typing like this, while there are others who like to type without capitalization and punctuation. It's all a matter of preference.


EDIT:
Technically you don't even need the "Well, then" in there. It could just be:
Hmm. Could you fix the improper grammar for me? I don't know what is and isn't correct.

Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on May 11 2008, 11:32 pm by DevliN. Reason: Finding more corrections.

Lmao I love Cool's avatar!

You have way too much time on your hands man, wow lol
high five!

Thanks guys!

You're very welcome.


And yeah, I have a shitload of time on my hands. >_<

this is why he deserves DevliN class