I wanted to write a song or a rhyme, a somewhat long one that would pass the time, but then i realized time has it's limits, and if i waste too much baby, we wont be in it.
Que Sera, Sera.
I wrote a little ditty that goes something like this, and i call it little because it's four lines long. Not meant to be long so, Don't say "It's too short"
I wanted to write a song or a rhyme, a somewhat long one that would pass the time, but then i realized time has it's limits, and if i waste too much baby, we wont be in it.
I wanted to write a song or a rhyme, a somewhat long one that would pass the time, but then i realized time has it's limits, and if i waste too much baby, we wont be in it.
ALL PRAISE YOUR SUPREME LORD CORBO
1. I have better spelling than you.
2. It doesn't even rhyme.
2. It doesn't even rhyme.
fuck you all
Mildly catchy, but I don't see why your trying to pass the time then waste it.
USE THE TIME!
USE THE TIME!
None.
It's too short.
No, there's a point where "it's meant to be short" isn't an excuse.
4 lines is barely any work. Especially when the poem doesn't rhyme or follow some other ruleset for a poem.
Also, spellcheck.
No, there's a point where "it's meant to be short" isn't an excuse.
4 lines is barely any work. Especially when the poem doesn't rhyme or follow some other ruleset for a poem.
Also, spellcheck.
None.
Quote from moneylover
Quote from candle12345
It's too short.
No, there's a point where "it's meant to be short" isn't an excuse.
4 lines is barely any work. Especially when the poem doesn't rhyme or follow some other ruleset for a poem.
Also, spellcheck.
No, there's a point where "it's meant to be short" isn't an excuse.
4 lines is barely any work. Especially when the poem doesn't rhyme or follow some other ruleset for a poem.
Also, spellcheck.
4 lines is plenty for a poem. It's actually five?
Quote from ToA
I wanted to write a song or a rhyme,
a somewhat long one that would pass the time,
but then I realized time has it's limits,
and if I waste too much baby,
we won't be in it.
a somewhat long one that would pass the time,
but then I realized time has it's limits,
and if I waste too much baby,
we won't be in it.
Shorten the bolded part, it sounds wordy. Make it like 'a pretty one, that would pass the time' or something simpler?
None.
- double post -
None.
- wtf, triple post... -
I can't report my own posts...
I can't report my own posts...
None.
Options
Pages: 1
Back to forum
Please log in to reply to this topic or to report it.
Members in this topic: None.
[08:47 am]
NimoStar -- the thing with the "*12" thing is completely misleading. The AI isn't using two control groups, it can use each of those actions to command a single unit individually and issue different commands to each single unit.[08:06 am]
NudeRaider -- NudeRaiderNudeRaider shouted: Oh_Man Artosis hasn't caught on how devastating the perfect focus fire is. With the mutas he was like "the Mutas always seem to have less hp than against a human". But he didn't notice that the flock he had selected always just had one muta that was hurt. Same with the wraiths here. He's talking about how valks+wraith is gonna destroy Pluto's valks, then 5s later he's dumbfounded the human player's air is just gone and he never figured out why. And for some reason didn't even think to go back and look at the battle.
*Pluto's wraiths[08:05 am]
NudeRaider -- Oh_ManOh_Man shouted: https://youtu.be/scNIjVxVaYA
Artosis hasn't caught on how devastating the perfect focus fire is. With the mutas he was like "the Mutas always seem to have less hp than against a human". But he didn't notice that the flock he had selected always just had one muta that was hurt. Same with the wraiths here. He's talking about how valks+wraith is gonna destroy Pluto's valks, then 5s later he's dumbfounded the human player's air is just gone and he never figured out why. And for some reason didn't even think to go back and look at the battle.[2026-9-21. : 4:14 pm]
Vrael -- perhaps there is a small professional player trapped in a box in the server rack where pluto is running? hmm?
Members Online: 
Sie_Sayoka, body no, 
Moose
Sie_Sayoka, body no, Moose