My fel heart
Does regard
Trap but tap
Now I pale
I'm in jail.
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your thoughts?
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hurrdurr analysis
) poem because of its theme, rhyme scheme, and style.Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Nov 29 2010, 1:33 am by Sand Wraith.
Jailbait
she/her
Lily, loli
My fel heart
Does regard
Trap but tap
Now I pale
I'm in jail.
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your thoughts?
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Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Nov 29 2010, 1:33 am by Sand Wraith.
My fel heart
Does regard
Trap but tap
Now I pale
I'm in jail.
-
your thoughts?
-
Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Nov 29 2010, 1:33 am by Sand Wraith.
Cool theme but I'm not at your level yet so it would be unfair if I criticized it.
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An artist's depiction of an Extended Unit Death
I think your rhyme pattern is actually:
AA
B
8
CC
D
D
AA
B
8
CC
D
D
Learn how EUDs work: A Mapmaker's Guide for Creating EUDs
Don't like learning?: EUDGen 2
Other stuff: Farlap Bound Maker
Dash: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 X
Jog: Original Warp
Other: Super Mario SC Fireball Guard Your Civilian Strength Contest
Don't like learning?: EUDGen 2
Other stuff: Farlap Bound Maker
Dash: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 X
Jog: Original Warp
Other: Super Mario SC Fireball Guard Your Civilian Strength Contest
Lord of the Locker Room
I'll admit that I clicked on this link for the Jailbait portion and not the Poem portion.
I'm not a man of poetry. I'm a man of crude deliciousness.
I'm not a man of poetry. I'm a man of crude deliciousness.
Show them your butt, and when you do, slap it so it creates a sound akin to a chorus of screaming spider monkeys flogging a chime with cacti. Only then can you find your destiny at the tip of the shaft.
Needs moar Big Black Cock.
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